Iambic Pentameter | Cause Love Hurts
I can see what you feel whether it's fake or real
My Heart is getting cold and feelings are getting old
You say you are mine but actually, you are not
And I know you're not but damn you are hot
I fall in love with you at a blind spot
Look what I wished for and what time has brought
I can see what you feel as I feel the same
Don't treat this way as Iโm not made of steel
I don't show my bruises that I had concealed
I hope you find your love mate, as I do
I'll forget you when I'll find someone new
But I can't forget your kiss as it was so true
Tried so hard to burn our memories but they grew.
I can see what you feel as I feel the same
I don't show my bruises that I had concealed
Don't treat this way as Iโm not made of steel.
Aesthetic Pens~
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